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Open Poetry #17

The Fall to Heaven

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-11-19 11:13 PM

On the mountain of life
Wherepon dignity reside
When your voice is sheltered
When your call is unanswered

Take a step down to the bottom
And do not rise above the fathom
Crawl on bent knees, be rejected
Cry alone in the cold with the damned

When you look up to heaven
You'll find the peace of angels
Do not be afraid to begin the climb
And when you reach the shepherd's lamb
Your journey was worth the wait

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-11-19 11:32 PM

Daniel, a very reassuring, comforting write.
Thank you for this one. Hugs, Nancy.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

2 posted 2001-11-20 12:21 PM

Daniel,
Nice write.
Peaches

Carol Lina
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 94
USA

3 posted 2001-11-20 07:53 AM

Very inspirational write, Daniel!

Carolina

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-11-20 08:20 AM

Beautiful penned as always.

Charisma ~TMP~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2001-11-21 03:48 PM

Thanks, Daniel, I could use some hope and inspiration these days This worked very well.

Happy Thanksgiving.
Sandra

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