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My Desire
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My Desire |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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My DeSire You touch my core setting to flame a bright fire My DeSire You reached within finding passion to me you came starting the flame You burn so hot a light so bright blinding my eyes no question whys Your need fills me the call answered wanting the same in love's sweet game Your words tell all with tenderness as passion flows and my love grows Your touch burns me with intense heat liquid fire My DeSire Karen Torbiak 2001© Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Karen, I think you shorted out returns deSire but not mine. LOL Wonderful write. |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Hot and sensual words that have great intensity, who needs the heat on, on such a night. I enjoyed this very much. Thank you for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gee Karen....I called the fireman last night. I sent the clone yesterday....what gives.. the heat is melting my comp. monitor screen and I had to turn the fan on high.... NICE DeSireable words...well written... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes,I desire the same.. Pretty hot stuff here, lady  Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
WOW!!!!!! This is hot stuff, Karen!!!  All writing comes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my Karen! We have got to find you a man/knight...and quick before you melt! LOL...Nancy. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"you touch my core" oh how fantastic....now thats love.... Lauren~ |
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