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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Lonely feeling as one might feel, It wouldn't be matter if I'm true To my heart and sky is witness. Though that's easily said, One can't help but feel helpless Upon her mirror for a stare. //this was my response to a thread under Feeling in Discussion forum. Lizzy http://poets2000.com/lizzyvivian/ ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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Carol Lina Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 94USA |
this begs to be read over and over. very nice, good lines here....this is a fresh poem with a lot of thought in every line! Carolina |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lizzy, a good write! But, leaves me wondering if you are okay...take care sweet one. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (edited 11-19-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's tough when we are misunderstood, and sad when only our reflection in the mirror knows what we are thinking or feeling. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Nancy I'm okay  Thanks.~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I am glad you are okay because your words are filled with a sad regret. Wonderful writing.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I know this feeling. Nicely said. Sandra |
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