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Have You Ever |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Have You Ever Have you ever felt the biting cold, the crowded emptiness? Have you ever lived for days on end, turned green from being envious? Have you ever been lost at what you have found, passed time, had your sorrows drowned? Have you ever fallen in love? Have you ever sweated it out, fallen apart? Have you ever suffered from a broken heart? Have you ever seen through closed eyes, wished upon a star, held a handful of lies? Have you ever fallen in love? Have you ever seen a shooting star, spend any time? Have you ever let your mind wander, witness a passionate crime? Have you ever hurt someones feelings, smelled a rose? Heard the silence, know what someone else knows? Have you ever fallen in love? Have you ever survived a storm, burn with fire? Have you ever captured the moment or felt loves desire? Have you ever tasted the rain, listened to views? Have you ever walked through the dew, have nothing to lose? Have you ever? |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Have you ever tasted the rain, listened to views" Many times.....too many times, this is strong and so full of emotion.... Greeneyes~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
All I can say to this is YES. I love the way you did this. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! YES!! YES!! Wonderful questions, and thoughts here! Enjoyed this one immensely. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Greeneyes - to too many times I must agree. Sandra - Yes is good ... thank you. Nancy - A triple!! I'm pleased! Thank you all for commenting. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Yes to all of your questions... very expressive...we all feel all of these emotions at some point love, RP |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Yes!!!!To all of the above. Very well done, Craig. I love it.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
very intense and deep writing. do it again!! -Dave |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Have you ever seen through closed eyes, wished upon a star, held a handful of lies? ================================ that verse spoke volumes to me.... this is a clever write of turn of phrase and employ of poetic "cliches".... all wrapped in well done rhymes... enjoyed this poetic ponderance poet sir You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
ctowen, "Have you ever survived a storm, burn with fire? Have you ever captured the moment or felt loves desire?" "Have you ever tasted the rain, listened to views?" I LOVE these lines! So powerful.. they envoke so much emotion. Very well done... I can't wait to read more from you. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
RP - One time or another...yes I agree! Karen - Have you ever seen a shooting Star? YES I HAVE !!! Dave - Thank you for commenting ... check the archives for a few more. JM - Word play and rhymes are a pleasure Thank you for your kind comments! Tara - You Again !! ( ha, ha, ... ) A pleasure to be read by you!! Thank you !! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
yes, yes and yes. Great thoughts here. Though i'm not sure whether i like love or not. Leaves you so vulnerable, some of which you've shown here. i'm just catching up after being away for a week, glad i didn't miss this one. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Welcome back ... your comments have been surely missed. Vulnerable, yes ... but look at the many things you could never have the pleasure of being a part of! *s Even the down side has its uniqueness! Welcome home Tracey!! |
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