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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-11-18 10:46 AM

If only I could help take the pain away.
I would be there and do it on this day.
I would guard your feelings  you know
As I’m  there walking through snow.

A storm has come blowing the flakes
causing  shimmers and some shakes.
Causing you to wonder, to cry in pain
as your life became  filled with rain.

May the wisdom and the words here
help your heart,  your burden my dear
For within this storm you now feel
are feelings so hard, and so very real.

Let my thoughts let you ever know
that this storm will not always  blow.
For you are strong enough to endure
and once again you’ll win, I’m sure.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-11-18 11:15 AM

Magnus,
"I'm sure." Well done, Enjoyed

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-11-18 11:23 AM

What a lovely inspirational piece Magnus! Beautiful thoughts to uplift a heavy heart. Much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

3 posted 2001-11-18 12:40 PM

Magnificent writing with a built in hug. Very well done. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-11-18 12:53 PM

Magnus,
What great words to help uplift a heavy heart.
Peaches

Carol Lina
Member

since 2001-11-18

Posts 94
USA

5 posted 2001-11-18 02:51 PM

You sound like a very nice person with a heart of gold. Someone who can write such great feelings and make the reader feel them!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-11-18 04:42 PM

Beautiful thoughts, Magnus. We all need a little encouragement now and then. Thanks for sharing this.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2001-11-18 04:53 PM

Seymour....I am sure as well...As sure as I
have ever been...thanx..

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2001-11-18 04:54 PM

Thank you Kit....happy you enjoyed...Just
trying to help a friend through a touchy
day....

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2001-11-18 04:55 PM

Karen, one hug coming right back atcha...
Thanx...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2001-11-18 04:56 PM

Thanx Peaches...and the feedback given from
the other person says they enjoyed this too.
And has helped lift their day....That means
much to me...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-11-18 04:57 PM

Thank you Carol....I try to write with
feelings....otherwise I could not...and I
feel that influences a writer's words very
much.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

12 posted 2001-11-18 04:58 PM

LW...you are most welcome....yes...we all
need some words every now and then....Hugs
say a lot too...

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