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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2001-11-18 07:57 AM

Melt Me

How your love melts me
Passions rage inside our souls
Flowing like lava

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-11-18 08:42 AM

Smiling....

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

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Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-11-18 12:56 PM

Ohhh, Tara, I like this!

*ahem* have fun when you go to Texas

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

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Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-11-18 01:00 PM

Beautifully expressed Tara! Wonderfully visual!

Best wishes,
/Kit

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04

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OK, USA

4 posted 2001-11-18 01:01 PM

Beautiful words and beautiful visualation.
Peaches

Carol Lina
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since 2001-11-18

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USA

5 posted 2001-11-18 03:02 PM

This is a great form of poetry isn't it?
That lava made me sweat! I needed that today!!

Carolina

RosePetal

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since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

6 posted 2001-11-18 03:03 PM

Mmmm doesnt it feel great to be melted by love just like m&m's?! Great write rosepetals

love,
rosepetal hehe

Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16

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Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-11-18 04:29 PM

Beautiful, Tara.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Startime
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since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

8 posted 2001-11-18 07:07 PM

Sizzling....this is a beauty. I think he will melt for you too.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01

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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

9 posted 2001-11-18 07:12 PM

Your words well expressed.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Moon Dust

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since 1999-06-11

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Skelmersdale, UK

10 posted 2001-11-18 08:01 PM

Oh yes very passionate

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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since 2001-05-15

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11 posted 2001-11-18 09:15 PM

melissa - don't worry. she will

dear, as always, your gifts astound me.
-Dave

Auguste

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By the sea

12 posted 2001-11-18 11:45 PM

Gee, could this be about you know who? LOL!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

rosepetals25

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13 posted 2001-11-19 12:15 PM

Wow

I have to admit I'm surprised! I really didn't think I would get many replies for this one.. and I found 12! I'm glad you all liked it

Thank you for your sweet replies

Hugs to you all.

And of course, Dave, I love you

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11

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Nova Scotia

14 posted 2001-11-20 11:53 AM

Add on more reply to your list... You seem to have expressed your feelings rather warmly as to say....I love this form of poetry..short but effective..

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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

Charisma

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lost in blue pages

15 posted 2001-11-20 01:33 PM

BEAUTIFUL!!!

Love it, love it.....

Charisma ~TMP~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

16 posted 2001-11-20 02:07 PM

And lava is very hot when it flows...James

Dennis
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Indiana

17 posted 2001-11-20 08:33 PM

i just melted

Dennis

rosepetals25

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18 posted 2001-11-20 09:24 PM

Like is said, I never thought this one would get this many replies... It's strange isn't it? The ones you really like never seem to do well and the ones you think will sink don't..*chuckles* Or is that just me? LOL. Thank you for reading and replying.. I'm glad you all enjoyed it

Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 11-20-2001).]

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

19 posted 2001-11-20 09:54 PM

beautiful!! you are a delight to read...

Lauren~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

20 posted 2001-11-20 10:20 PM

Oh Tara! This is HOT!!! Hugs, Nancy!

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

21 posted 2001-11-20 10:23 PM

You are melting all over these blue pages dear Tara.

Balladeer

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22 posted 2001-11-20 11:55 PM

Sounds like quite an eruption is on the horizon...

NapalmsConstantlyConfused

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23 posted 2001-11-21 08:34 AM

and since you continue to amaze me with your skills, my dear *ah-HEM* bump

-Dave

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

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state of mind

24 posted 2001-11-21 09:55 AM

I agree with dave...
BUMP BUMP BUMP
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

25 posted 2005-04-05 05:34 AM

Bump...james

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