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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-31 04:45 PM

It's written in the stars
On a canvas of brilliant blue
I have etched it across the sky
Three words saying 'I love you'

At the end of the magical rainbow
You will find me waiting there
Take my hand and I'll lead you to heaven
As we climb each and every stair

We'll be guided by the moonlight
As we sail across the skies
So much love and deep devotion
I now see within your eyes

Two souls have now united
Within your loving arms I must be
For as long as the golden sun
Melts across the wondrous sea

Suetang

[This message has been edited by Suetang (01-01-2002 09:54 PM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-31 04:48 PM

a very romantic, moving poem of hope. Enjoyed reading this Sue.

I am/Kathleen/

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-31 08:05 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet Sue, such a promise of true love shines in your lovely serenades! (smiles) May the golden sun of loves eternity forever glisten above the ocean of your heart! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

3 posted 2001-12-31 08:10 PM

Sue,
Welcome back! Awesome write. I love the imagery and message. Very romantic.

EagleOne
Member Elite

since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

4 posted 2001-12-31 09:36 PM

This is lovely Sue, just lovely!

It's okay to shoot the moon ~ John Sebastian

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

5 posted 2001-12-31 10:41 PM

Such intense romance in these lovely words Sue. Happy New Year Roger

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

6 posted 2001-12-31 10:47 PM

Two souls have now united
Within your loving arms I must be
For as long as the golden sun
Melts across the wondrous sea

Very nicely written. It is romantic, and the words you use to paint a picture of eternity makes a vivid picture.

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2001-12-31 10:49 PM

Lovely thoughts Suetang...James

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