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seraphin
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0 posted 2001-12-31 03:10 PM



Little do I hope dare say I?
Little could I care.
Little thoughts, of little moments,
Spent in vast despair.

Tucked up neat inside
A little corner in my mind.
Beside the little dreams of you,
It takes so little to remind.

Yet, hope a little this I did.
Quiet reverie.
Little sparks of what if,
He does come back to me.

Will I run like a river
Into his arms?
The answer remains a riddle.
For I don't think I'll miss him ever again,
Well maybe I will...
Just a little.


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1 posted 2001-12-31 03:27 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sandra, this is so heartwrenching, I too can relate to how you feel! (sigh) I pray with all my heart this sorrow will be replaced by complete comfort of love in your heart to forever wind through your dreams! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-31 03:28 PM



This has a little tender quality that is as endearing as it is charming...

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3 posted 2001-12-31 04:28 PM


Very sweet poem. floria
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4 posted 2006-08-26 01:49 PM


Sandra~
I like the easy lilt of this one~

'Will I run like a river
Into his arms?

How creatively original is this ?
VERY !

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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