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Mirrors Of Eden (Duet With SEA)
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Mirrors Of Eden (Duet With SEA) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Mirrors Of Eden By: Susan E. Allan and Noah Eaton 12/31/01 Your reflection caresses me I can feel the heavens foreshadowing With your sweet touch of love A kiss that has my heart dancing Mirror images, of my soul I feel within your arms Swept up in the magic Of your captivating charms Conducting enchantment Driving harmony to the heartstrings Resting in eiderdown clouds In this phantom waltz we will be embracing Floating on the music Created when joined in dance Oh the warmth of your eyes, So lost in this romance Singing happily in our garden of Eden Embroidering dreams with love forevermore Our melody resounds through time as angels sigh, "Encore!" [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-31-2001 01:33 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue and Noah! Not just are the angels saying it, but Nancy is yelling from the balcony "Encore!" Wonderful duet filled with such vivid imagery! Well done you two!. *Happy New Year Hugs To You Both* *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Such a romantic poem you two have created! Obviously love has entered your souls and is there to stay. Hopefully both of your love stay true and give you more and more happiness in you lives! Great duet you two! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah & SEA - you two romantics you. Just wonderfully written, and very romantic.. BC |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
OOHH this is so magical! You two certainly did a fantastic duet! This must go back on TOP!! love, RP |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
You two write well together..nicely done Noah and Sea..hugs  ~Victoria~ "To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides." |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
CLAP CLAP CLAP, STANDING OVATION. Oh how very nice this duet is. floria |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
this is beautiful  |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
A duet supreme!!! Just so evenly matched in talent...both you and Sue. Enjoyed this very much. ***Ivy Rose |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Gorgeous romantic poetry.......Beautiful writing from both of you. Wonderful job!  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
WOW! What an amazing poem. You two did an awsome job! It flows together so well. You both are great poets! Happy New Year! Noelle "Hold fast to dreams, for is dreams die, life is a broken winged bird that cannot fly" Langston Hughes |
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