Open Poetry #17 |
When The Countdown Comes. PdV's challenge |
Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
When The Countdown Comes Soft, sweet kisses sent on the wings of love. Warm hugs delivered by angels above. Words of love, in rhyme, of dreams unfulfilled. Eyes shining brightly with tears unspilled. When the countdown comes spare a thought for me, as I wish for you right here, beside me. I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I like! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks Eddie. I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like it too. We should all be so lucky as to have someone with us at this time. (I hope you mean the countdown to a new year!). Into my library with this one! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee, this is tender....makes me think of friends far away (((hugs))) have a Happy New Year!!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dee, Nicely done, enjoyed |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dee~ Sweet gal ... I wish you everything your heart desires~ 'When the countdown comes spare a thought for me, as I wish for you right here, beside me.' And thoughts gather good friends in the heart~ You are here in my heart-thoughts~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so tender, such love. How many of us feel this way for those who can’t be with us at the midnight hour. Beautiful Dee. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
PdV, the countdown to the new year is a time I think of loved friends I miss. Susan, this friend isn't too far away and I did get to chat to him for a while last night. Seymour, thank you. I'm glad you liked. Marge, my heart desires so much...where do I start? You were in my thoughts last night too. Hope 2002 is everything you want and more. Tracey, it is hard to celebrate when the ones you love aren't there. But I did get to chat to him so it was great. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
so the new years here, where's my New Years kiss. Well, save it for me if you ever visit Canada. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Park... I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When the countdown comes spare a thought for me, as I wish for you right here, beside me. ============================== So wheres my kiss??? lol This poem of longings gift is its sweet sincerety....I relate to its message well. Im playing catch up Dee-girlie...my comp is not starting the new year off well...but I wanted to wish you a Happy New Year and thank you for all your faithful reads ... and Mark asks me to send the same to you. Your love of poetry shines in your words to the forums. take care sweet poetess jm |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I Liked this. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Janet, hope you have a wonderful New Year too. Hope the puter is on fixed soon. Send my love and best wishes to Mark as well. Glad you liked my little attempt at Sharon's challenge. You take care too. Opeth, glad you enjoyed. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
im sure that person is thinking of you! hope your new year is going well. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Rose Petal, thanks for the bump Yes he does think of me and I of him. We are good friends and keep in touch when we can. My new year is going wonderful. My first grandchild arrived on the weekend. A little boy. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awwwwwww a baby boy, what is his name? Congrats |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Thanks. His name is Zachary Blake and he is gorgeous. This is where I put the announcement. /pip/Forum3/HTML/001580.html Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Just spending some time wandering through the archives an reminicing, and ya know, I still like! We are all just prisoners here of our own device ~ Hotel California, The Eagles |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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