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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-12-30 10:12 AM


Accepting The Tears

Swallowing each one
I’ve accepted the tears
My heart wonders why
He no longer appears

As each tear dissolves
No sound they make
Aching seems to grow
In a silent heartbreak

There was no warning
I thought him a friend
No way of knowning
Why forever does end

We shared for so long
Now I’m swept aside
Year ends in sadness
These tears I will hide

As the days tick over
My heart descending
I am suffering silently
Of a friendship ending

Hope©2001

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Jamie
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1 posted 2001-12-30 10:16 AM


A sad sad poem. As your name might suggest--perhaps there is hope in there somewhere.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

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2 posted 2001-12-30 10:47 AM


*sigh* my heart goes out to you, dear Hope. I know this kind of pain all too well. I can only pray that the New Year will bring joy to your heart. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-30 10:48 AM


HopeS,
Enjoyed and there is always hope. LOL *L*

HopeS
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4 posted 2001-12-30 10:54 AM


Thanks Jamie for your kind reply, yes I agree
all I can say at this moment is
hopefully
Hope

HopeS
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5 posted 2001-12-30 10:55 AM


Thanks Karen for
your care and concern
I guess my foolish heart
will never learn
Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2001-12-30 10:57 AM


Thanks Seymour for your reply
yes there is always hope ,
Hope remains amongst her pains

Hope

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7 posted 2001-12-30 11:17 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Hope, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to you and I pra that many new friendshoips can be made and dreams will come true for you in thr New Year! (sigh) Always believe in your heart and they will come true! (kiss on cheek) We all love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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