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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-12-30 08:46 AM

Largo

Luminously…
slowly, this
sound of Largo
by harp,

shimmers,

and a flute, coming in
so slow,

like warm honey to
the skin

opulently quiet,

she visualizes thin,
translucent fingers,
caressing each
note

like a lover,
played
fine

in the Key of Largo
on a harp,

a dream

floats

©Karilea Rilling Jungel
30 December 2001

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

1 posted 2001-12-30 08:50 AM

Very cool read. at first i wondered at the form but it is definitely right. thanks.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-12-30 10:18 AM

like warm honey to
the skin

opulently quiet,

she visualizes thin,
translucent fingers,
caressing each
note

like a lover,
played
fine
===================================

yes....the form is fine...very very fine...
yes...floating fine

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

3 posted 2001-12-30 10:25 AM

Geesh ... makes me want to throw in my favorite CD and climb into the hot-tub

Beautiful

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2001-12-30 10:31 AM

Sunshine,
Lovely, *L*

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

5 posted 2001-12-30 11:13 AM

not quite sure if that left so will repaet

I liked this very much
Felt the words more than read them
heard them rather more than understood them
Yet the meaning is clear
Like a note left hanging in the still air
Arthur

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2001-12-30 11:16 AM

ah, this is wonderful!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-12-30 12:01 PM

(smiles) Soooooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your lips flute with the soft earthly serenade of pure love! (sigh) So sweet and harmonious, sweet friend, we all love ou so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-12-31 02:30 AM

I am smiling

~*~ Happy New Year ~*~
~* Carpe' Diem *~

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

9 posted 2001-12-31 04:33 AM

Really beautiful work Sunshine.

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