Open Poetry #17 |
Count the Change |
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
Cant you Own me take away my debt and i'll appreciate this wet wet world if i were on again would i still let you in to water my plans and tell me how much i weigh and how long i can play today like a careful little man i am here to push your hand and now ive got the same my favorite toy (the same) but every toy becomes insane wondering whats in a name and why bitter and blind come to mind Try me im free window shop and drool asking you to fold keep doing as your told both reaching to the light but well prepared .. for our long lives.. by John Dixon no longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
like the style and the punch behind some of the lines..well done |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An organized ramble...I read it three times... bitter thoughts, tightly held... write on! |
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