Open Poetry #17 |
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Love can be so good |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind ![]() |
I am a window, opened to you; and the curtain, softly touched you; A tissue, a hand that weeps you when you cry. And when you call on me, I answer. I am plant, and you’re my fountain. I depend on you, and needed you. We are like day and night, sun and moon, walk by side by side. I came to life because of you. And for that I’m forever thankful. And the sky is the witness of our love, prove of our faith. Together we have tasted to the sour and the sweet. And never I want to be without you again. We have been through the challenge of death. And to this day we are still together. I am a window, opened to you; and the curtain, softly touched you. Touched, so that you may not change But comfort within your skin; Touched, so that say over to sadness, And spill the joy of your heart all over your face. Touched, so we may help each other grow. Songs of our love will go down to history... Tell me that you feel the same way as I do, That you want to hold me forever and ever; And through the time your love won’t ever change. And we will be happy forever, never get bored with each other, never run out of things to say. I am a window, opened to you; and you’re the sunshine, shine through my heart. Your shine is so bright that I cannot hide from you; So bright that I always fill warm within you. And I will live for you forever and ever... Lizzy http://poets2000.com/lizzyvivian/ ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Lovely work here. The images were beautiful. ![]() All writing comes |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am a window, opened to you; and the curtain, softly touched you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Lizzy, this is just beautiful! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Yes, love can be so good. It takes work to keep it alive and wonderful but it is worth every effort. Wonderful writing. I really enjoyed this poem. ![]() ![]() Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
These thoughts on love are beautiful. Peaches |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Thanks all. It was a song for a novel I'm writing ![]() I got a question: What else beside 'smile' can be put in colons to make a face? I can only make a smile. And I don't know where to look it up. I clicked on UBB Code is On and it wasn't a link. ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
try ( : ) and ( heart ) and a ( : ) to make a ![]() a ( : ) and ( clapping ) and a ( : ) to get ![]() and a ( : ) with ( crying ) and ( : ) to form ![]() These should work for you. |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
yes,sometimes,love can be so good ![]() ![]() |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
thanks ctowen! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Lizzy ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Lovely images of love and longing Lizzy. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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