Open Poetry #17 |
Breath Of The Dream Catcher |
Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
The night spirits whisper through the flames singing their words of love, humming their thoughts of hope. It is the dreaming night as the Dream Catcher lays full upon her bed of stars. Below...the pale moonlight is glistening as a halo about the hearts of those ~~~~~~~who are caught in its river of dreams. Those who lay still next to the dancing flames of light. Seeing only those visions that speak to the mind, speak to the heart...clear hauntings that haunt the day; yet are just far enough ~~~~~~~into the dawn to steal away the Dream Catcher's ~~~~~~~~radiant breath. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ivy Rose, Nice entrance, I like the way the Dream catcher stole my breat, very soft and entrancing. Write on Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivy Rose, A nice write enjoyed the post. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Nicely written, enjoyed muchly. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A sensually soft and alluring write.. Much enjoyed... |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Beautiful, Ivy Rose. I believe this is an Indian legend, yes...? You tell it very well |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Ivy Rose....just lovely. ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A very enjoyable read, well done! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
welcome to Passions and I love your name! This is indeed very lovely! I am/Kathleen/ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such celestial and heavenly beauty fill your words, sweet friend, I can't wait to read again all your spiritual and Native American legendry here! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ivy, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is the dreaming night as the Dream Catcher lays full upon her bed of stars. Below...the pale moonlight is glistening as a halo about the hearts of those ~~~~~~~who are caught in its river of dreams. Those who lay still next to the dancing flames of light. ================================== your imagery is wonderful...this is superb poetic story telling... very cool poem...mystical and magical. Very well done poetess Ivy jm When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ivy Rose- This is beautifully penned. Much enjoyed reading this. Welcome to Passions! Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I LOVE IT!!! I LOVE IT!!! It is so very good to see your wonderful visions gracing our blue pages, Ivy. I have so missed the magic of your writing. Welcome to Passions. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (12-30-2001 11:16 AM).] |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You have written this with great beauty. I enjoyed it very much If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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