Open Poetry #17 |
Take My Hand |
Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Take My Hand Come, give me your hand. We can fly, or just walk hand in hand over this land. Be my friend, my soulmate, my love. Dream with me, and we will fantasize about the clouds above. Come with me on the highway of life, a wonderful trip - a mysterious pattern of happiness, peace and strife. I will be right there with you I will never leave your side. I will never cheat or lie and forever promise to comply. I extend my heart to you. Just reach out – hold on tight and dream with me. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Be my friend, my soulmate, my love. Dream with me, and we will fantasize about the clouds above. Come with me on the highway of life, a wonderful trip - a mysterious pattern of happiness, peace and strife. ===================================== a lovely dream indeed ... and promises that we all wish to hear from someone. well done poetess Ariana ... reminded me of that song..Dream a little dream with me. Happy New Year...may your dreams come true When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Janet Marie: Thank you for your kind reply. I wish you a Happy New Year too! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo romantic, sweet Adriana, I love it! (kiss on cheek) Your romnantic heart always shines withy loves beauty! May you forever walk hand in hand in pure joy! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Adriana, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!What man could not take you up on such a romantic offer as this. I love it. You weave love so well. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Ariana - always knew that you could write well. A lovely romantic poem. Keep writing them. BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Such a simple and beautiful request. Now to find the one who will understand.. Nice writing. Sandra |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Ariana, such beautiful words from a beautiful heart! Great write here and I loved it! Thansk for sharing Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Noah: Thank you, thank you, thank you for your gracious comments (and of course the kiss on the cheek). I am so glad that you liked it. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Startime: That special man (not sure where yet) will hopefully take me up on it. Thank you for stopping by. (thanks for the hug too) BC: Yes - your words of encouragement are appreciated. Thank you. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sandra: I am on a mission to find just that certain somebody who will understand. Thanks for stopping by. Coming from a superb poet as yourself, I appreciate the compliment. Saunni: Thank you for stopping by. I love to write, even though it may take me quite some time, but once it is done, I post it. I am glad that you liked it. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Beautiful penned...enjoyed every line and like it very much! Charisma |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Ariana, sounds like a mission destined to be successful! What man could refuse such beautiful words and promises? I wish you all the best! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
OK...if you keep writing romance as well as you are...I am gonna have to cut in the afterburners and really start cranking out some scorchers.... Nicely done Ariana...Have I said enough??? |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Charisma: Thank you for such a nice compliment. I am happy that you liked it. Balladeer: Thank you for stopping by. I hope my mission is successful and if it is, you will be the first to know. walker: Happy that you liked it and invite you to stop by again. Now Mr "M": I am waiting for the scorchers - start the afterburners and start cranking. Thank you for your nice words - coming from a pro is quite a compliment. And by the way, you can say as much as you want. Always welcome. |
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