Open Poetry #17 |
Sweet Kimmy |
RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
To have a Sister like you I consider myself blessed Sibblings are a special gift In me, you bring out the best At times we tend to disagree I know it's not a lack of maturity Sometimes we can't see eye to eye We are close but we have different minds In you, I find comfort to confide You sense what it is I try to hide We show understanding and respect You're a valuable diamond I protect I can only hope we'll remain this close Cause being apart from you is what I fear most We've shared secrets and laughter Unhappiness, Pain, and everything after You have a radiance so beautiful A heart so tender beyond the usual You'll always be my best friend for certain So if ever you're hurtin....I'll be here for you There's a bright world awaiting us Behind every dark blue curtain |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful tribute to your sister Rosepetal! Oh, I do hope you've presented this piece to her ... I'm sure she'll treasure it! Very nicely done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
There's a bright world awaiting us Behind every dark blue curtain .... Oh, yes... there is ... and this one is a wonderful write to your sister... Regards, sudhir |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is so sweet of you to write such a beautiful poem for your loving sister! (sigh) Kim is soooooo lucky to have such a sweet loving sister like you, as together your love will glow always! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet Joanna, I love you! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* I bet she just loves this poem. BRAVO!!!Very well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nice message for your sister! Hope she gets to read this. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A delightful rendition in the art of sisterhood... Enjoyed this! |
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