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Dearest Love, ( Poet DeVine's Challenge)
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Dearest Love, ( Poet DeVine's Challenge) |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Dearest love, My heart aches with remember Of the time that used to be Our once upon a happiness When you were here with me I dream of you so often I see your handsome face The way you used to look at me The warmth found in your embrace Your goodbye nearly killed me It tore my world apart Yet, hidden deep inside You are still within my heart I found your letter the other day The one before the last You said you loved me But now, that’s passed I still don’t understand My heart misses you so much Your love was the very breath in me I lived for your gentle touch I put the letter away But not your memory You are still my only love The only one that will ever be….. ~SEA~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...I like your's better..Nicely done... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh my gosh, this is soooooo breathtakingly beautiful, I love it! (smiles) May this love letter be a token of eternal love to last ever after and fill both your hearts with true happiness and joy! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your love was the very breath in me I lived for your gentle touch I put the letter away But not your memory You are still my only love The only one that will ever be….. ========================================== *sigh* mirror mirror on the wall. these are my kind of letters..they rhyme. *L* beautiful write of emotion Sea... love the pic, its so you.  When your own emptiness is all thats getting through |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I think I know...smile... Sad, but not bitter... Hugs to you! (I would say more, but .... grin, I'm serious about this discretion thing, DAMMIT...oooooops!  )and it's all a challenge, isn't it? Loved it! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I came back to scratch my "oops"---  Sue? I add further that I admire you for this one, and Mag, it's not a competition--but I'm pleased with your honesty! [This message has been edited by serenity (12-28-2001 05:47 PM).] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wow...makes me want to cry!! Thank you for this..it's going in my library.  |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sue: I need some tissue. Absolutely beautiful. You certainly know how to write. Great writing. It is a keeper. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
No one could ever say goodbye to you, SEA Great work of fiction!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Just popped in to say I love this Sue! hugs. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Susan, Ohhhhh what memories this brings back. You descibe the feelings well. Wonderful answer to the challange Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've always wondered why words can take us back in an instant. . . now I know. . . well done my friend. . . challenge met. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Your words touch the heart with feelings as one flows through this poem. Gentle tenderness is wrapped within each memory. Beautiful. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It made me cry, Sue...the sorrow seeps from between the lines. Beautifully written.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Man oh man!! The seas cross and they part, but I'm convinced they're one and the same. Sad to say I'm on the same wave...... This was sadly beautiful. Oh sniff!!  |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
SEAs a D but for this I'll give her an A!  |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
That must have been painful. Even though he's still in your heart, I hope you have gotten over your pain. Thank you for sharing. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Sue - So sad and so good. The only thing that can cure lost love is amnesia.lol Well done. Dave |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Susan, This was so beautiful! I am so glad that I came in here today and yours was the first piece I read!! As always your work is so brilliant written with so much love! Take care hon. Amy "Just because someone doesn't love you the way you want them to, doesn't |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
this is touching...I lovely love poem Eliza Simmons |
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