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Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2001-12-28 11:53 AM

I hear the melody of a bluebird
within weeping clouds of heartbreak
but true love always prevails
washing away memories of heartache

Feel mother nature's hand of sunshine
gently stroke the forehead of the morn
feel love anew bloom within your teardrops
an umbrella of happiness is reborn

Remove misty sunglasses from weary eyes
let us see the reflection of your soul
as you bask in tenderness of love
upon melting lips, love will softly stroll

Open your heart to treasures of the sea
a ruby everlasting, you are to me

*Dedicated to a special friend*

[This message has been edited by Victoria (12-28-2001 12:55 PM).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-12-28 11:57 AM

a wonderful dedication and a lovely poem of hope!

I am/Kathleen/

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

2 posted 2001-12-28 12:00 PM

This is a touching gift to your friend, Victoria. I'm sure it will be appreciated. The images in here are very nice, especially the line about Mother Nature's hand of sunshine. Well done!

God bless America, my home sweet home.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2001-12-28 12:01 PM

Not only a wonderful dedication, but also beautiful writing Victoria. Stunning work. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2001-12-28 01:07 PM

Thank you so much Kathleen..always lovely to
hear from you...hope you are enjoying the holidays.hugs

Thank you very much Elizabeth..I hope she enjoys it too..thank you for taking the time to peek in

nice to hear from you

Thank you Donna..happy you enjoyed my words

as i enjoy yours too

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-12-28 05:39 PM

(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your friend will cherish this always, this brought tears to my eyes! (kiss on cheek) Your heart sings like this bluebird and your wings of the heart spread with sweet music of love! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a delight to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

6 posted 2001-12-28 08:14 PM

Vic, I hope this is true! It sure sounds beautiful.
Sandra

Jamie
Member Elite

since 2000-06-26

Posts 3168
Blue Heaven

7 posted 2001-12-28 08:58 PM

A beautiful poem that carries the hope so many need. Very nice Victoria.

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

8 posted 2001-12-28 10:46 PM

thank you for you kind comments..Noah and Sandra and Jamie..love hearing from you this evening...

~Victoria~

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-12-29 08:39 AM

I'd be remiss if I didn't respond to such a beautiful poem, ~V~:

So pleasing are the rhythmic words
melodies that hold the weep
single notes that keep me true
to loving friends, whose touch runs deep.

I thank you for the "feel" you send
surrounding warmth, support each morn
the tenderness, this side of you
that rises best in me, reborn.

I hear the melody of all,
removing mist from weary eyes
the fading hurt, to reign no more
I open up to rainbow skies.

I treasure you, of heart that's pure
In friendship everlasting, more.

wishing we were in Vegas...Have a wonderful New Year
M

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart.
It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-29-2001 08:41 AM).]

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

10 posted 2001-12-29 09:56 AM

a beautiful response M..i can see you are awake before me ha..miss early bird..HUGS

~Victoria~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

11 posted 2001-12-30 02:26 AM

Victoria-
  What a beautiful and heartfelt tribute
  to your friend...just lovely.
  Hugs,
  ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

12 posted 2001-12-30 07:03 PM

Thank you Vicky..i almost missed your reply ha..
appreciate you peeking in...hugs

~Victoria~

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