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Open Poetry #17

My Silence

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2001-12-28 01:05 AM

In my silence.
I seek nothingness of mind,
Leaving this irrelevance undefined.
Back off with your rules fool,
Back off with your jive.
While you argue with me i'll just leave you behind,
In my silence.

I seek truth,
In my nothingness of mind,
Truth in my thoughtless bliss.
I want to kiss your beauty,
What I cant grasp, beyond my thought,
Beyond my fears.
In this silence I believe.

Fine by me If you like me not,
In truth,
I haven't given it much thought.
I've been too busy with my silence.
Would you like to join me?

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Glenn Logan
Member

since 2001-10-10

Posts 111
Virginia

1 posted 2001-12-28 11:07 AM

Beautiful piece of wandering verse; too subtle to snare most, but I find myself re-reading it and enjoying it more each time. I love the ending!!!

Keep up the good work.

Glenn Logan

craigrk
Member

since 2001-12-23

Posts 123

2 posted 2001-12-28 11:26 AM

Silence of Zen, well spoke.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2001-12-28 01:27 PM

EagleScorpion - great writing. The silence, I like it...

BC

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-12-28 01:40 PM

I enjoyed much these words found in your silence. This was deep writing. Thank you.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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