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{{{ I am What You make of Me }}}
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
 ~*~ I am what you make of me ~*~ I am what you make of me The love of your dreams The hatred of your nightmares The wonder in your questioning eyes The submission in your weak moments An entire prospect of living when you look deep down I’m the answer… to your prayers The truth … in the midst of your lies The goal… behind your quest The true legend… in your mythology The Holy grail for which Nations fought And Arthur roamed in search I am your golden city Camelot, Your queen Guinevere loved and misunderstood, adored and mistrusted betrayed and forever held in the perfect Arthurian legend. Yes…. I am what you make of me…. But … More….. I am What I make of myself ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you * An old poem…I don’t know why I felt like posting it today ~Art: Jonathon Bowser~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Wow, My Melody... then indeed, you are many exquisite things. But the ones that should truly count are those based upon your last two lines. Wonderful thoughts and a beautiful picture too.  -MVS "If you don't ask: you don't get." -Steve Miller |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I am What I make of myself ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Beautiful Melody. Loved the pic and the music as well. Very well done! ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Melody, this is so good, I think it says everything, everything we want to be to someone, and everything we have to be for ourselves. Sandra |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
We must always accept ourselves before others will accept us. Much truth here. Enjoyed.  All writing comes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
then. . . you are a poet. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just beautiful. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful and true. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Mark~ Oh,yes........or maybe.... Thank you dear friend for your ever kind words.....They are always greatly appreciated ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Nancy~ Thank you so much for your kind words.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sandra~ Yes ...what we want to be.....and what we should be to ourselves.... Thank you dearest.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Lone wolf~ Thank you so much for reading... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Sven~ Am I? Then that is something I respect from a poet whom I cherish his views .... Thank you my dear friend... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ SmartChick Thank you so much. I'm glad you loved it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ walker thank you for your kind words.. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 11-17-2001).] |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This is the best poem I have read all day. Often I hear people mumble that life sucks...and you have just reminded me that it can be improved once happy with thyself. Excellent work, in the library this one goes love, RP |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
"Yes…. I am what you make of me…. But … More….. I am What I make of myself" This whole poem is wonderful but these last lines are what hit me the hardest. BRAVO!!!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Rose Petal~ I'm honered that you think that way... Thank you dearest for your kind words. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~Startime~ Thank you sooooo much for the kind reply... I'm glad that you enjoyed it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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