Open Poetry #17 |
A Gift for My Friend |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
Angel wings Gentle as the morning dew Touching my empty heart Once cold and hardened By the winter snow Now brimming, overflowing With warmth and happiness I look into your loving eyes Not a word spoken, with my eyes I ask how can this be so With only your gentle smile Your voice echoing in my mind "because you are and will always be my friend" searching within my very soul How can I, a lowly creature Be worthy of such a wondrous gift This loving woman who must see Something beyond the darkness who loves the man I am inside rather than what can only be seen If it were in my power I would pluck the brightest star From the heavens above And give this gift to you with a string of gold I would hang it from your neck to keep it next to your loving heart for you are a bright star shining in my night sky giving this lowly poet hope where none was before so I thank the lord above For bringing you into my life An angel sent from heaven A true friend, always Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
This poem expresses the full meaning of the phrase "that's what friends are for". Being a good friend, she hasn't given up hope on you, and you shouldn't think yourself to be a lowly poet, coz you're not! Really enjoyed it! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a beautiful tribute to one who has brought this light into your life and heart Lonely Shadow. Wonderfully tender sentiments ... just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful Lonely Shadow! May she always be near to inspire you my friend. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
A beautiful gift for a friend who sees into your heart. Very well done. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
True friends make life worthwhile always. Lovely work! All writing comes |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful expression of love. |
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