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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali 
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The ash That fell on the ground Looks like snow But has the scent Of burning flesh This is one of my more morbid ones... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very sad......My heart goes out to you. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
reminds me of World War 2.. sad and short, but well written. Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Yes, they sowed it in the fields. Very good. |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
isn't snow white and ashes grey? hrmm, maybe it's one of them "urban" snowflakes...nicely done... |
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