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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-12-27 11:49 AM



Your heart speaking
of a want
living and breathing
in the center of you

a want which,
when it draws
it’s breath, mimics
the prairie’s gusty gale

in the voice of this wanting
I long to be taken in it’s
wings and carried away,
so your winds may subside….

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1 posted 2001-12-27 11:51 AM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your yearning be replaced with the happiness of true love! (kiss on cheek) You deserve the greatest joy, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-27 12:02 PM


This beautiful poem flows with the winds of want. Absolutely magnificent.... Your longing is very well said. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
3 posted 2001-12-27 02:41 PM


Noah, Startime,
thank you both so much...

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4 posted 2001-12-28 12:20 PM


in the voice of this wanting
I long to be taken in it’s
wings and carried away,
so your winds may subside….

I understand this feeling very well.  Great write, Annie.

EagleScorpion
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5 posted 2001-12-28 01:43 AM


your words are true, and come from something I indeed long for
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