Open Poetry #17 |
The Breath of Want |
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Your heart speaking of a want living and breathing in the center of you a want which, when it draws it’s breath, mimics the prairie’s gusty gale in the voice of this wanting I long to be taken in it’s wings and carried away, so your winds may subside…. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your yearning be replaced with the happiness of true love! (kiss on cheek) You deserve the greatest joy, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This beautiful poem flows with the winds of want. Absolutely magnificent.... Your longing is very well said. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Noah, Startime, thank you both so much... |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
in the voice of this wanting I long to be taken in it’s wings and carried away, so your winds may subside…. I understand this feeling very well. Great write, Annie. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
your words are true, and come from something I indeed long for |
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