Open Poetry #17 |
Hidden Love |
Lonely Shadow Member
since 2000-03-14
Posts 128Virginia |
gentle smile upon my face As I sense your velvet touch Electricity flowing through my body As I look into your sapphire eyes Praying that you will not see the dreams, the feelings I hold true as your loving heart how I long to hold you in my arms to touch your lips with mine all of the nights I have spent my thoughts dwelling upon you envying the man who holds your heart a sigh escaping my lips wishing I could know such splendor so here I stand before you trying to hide what is felt within the love and adoration for a beautiful angel a woman whose beauty is only surpassed by her heart gentle and kind, loving and pure if you could only see the wonders I see in you may my dream become reality For I cannot keep such secrets hidden For love cannot be held at bay forever It would break its binds and be made known Then the world would know my love for you And the age old question shall return "could you ever love me back?" Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Shadow~Isn't it worth the risk of telling her? Perhaps she feels the same. Oh! BTW...this is very well done! Enjoyed, Nancy. ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how could she not love you back when words such as this flow from your heart to your pen. Very beautiful writing. I lost myself in the tenderness of it. Good luck. I hope you receive the lady you desire. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
How did I miss this one? This is beautifully sweet. enjoyed. Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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