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Time Will Tell
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Time Will Tell |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Time constantly heals, it will wash away the blues yet there is always the trace of unsightly residues. it has no master, for the plan of events occurs on this earth or below where you're sent. it honours the brave and punishes the cruel then it forgets the valour and remembers the drool, it's course has been laid and referenced beware. time has no past and the future is where? the hills are just as green on the other side if its time you escape, you will n'er hide. riches crumble, old glories waver thin, look to the clock for the hour you're in. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-27-2001 10:50 AM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hmmmmmmmm..... I think time isn't what we need to worry about. I think we need to worry about what we do, learn, say, etc. while we are here.... I like the way your poetry makes me think of things  |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This was very catchy, and made me think about time and its affects on me. Great post! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh I love SEA's response to this poem. She said just what I was thinking. Well written and thought provoking. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! Tes, we ust always use our time with pleasure and capture each moment instead of spending time wondering or worrying. (big hugggssssss) Sooooo well-expressed, dearest Martin, your words are always so wonderful to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Sea and Startime, Thanks for your comments. It goes without saying it's important what we do and how we do it but that takes time nonetheless and many of do take for granted that we have all the time in the world, when in reality time has us,lol thankyou Hypnosis and Noah, for your comments too. |
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