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Victoria
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0 posted 2001-12-26 04:52 PM



i waited all day for the phone to ring
and hoped he would call
i thought he had forgot about me
but as i got ready to turn in for the night
the phone rang..it was he
"Hello nana..its Nick
Merry Christmas ..are you alright?"
told me all thats been going on
he said he was driving now
two jobs and on the honor roll
colleges sending him letters
the distance has not taken its toll
he said he has his own car
and on top of everything
he wants to be a baseball star
he said "im not cocky nana
but im really good"
and i said
"well you have to have confidence
in yourself" and he said "yes i do"

and before he hung up..
just like when he was small
said.."i love you Nana"..
and told me he was
six foot one inches tall.



© Copyright 2001 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-26 05:19 PM


aw and big tear in my eye!!!!

iambic-
I am/Kathleen

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2 posted 2001-12-26 10:07 PM


Even big boys are still little boys at heart.
They just want a hug every now and then...
No different than way back when...This is
a cute write..touching..

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3 posted 2001-12-26 10:14 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet Victoria, your love and Nick's shines in this beautifully touching and lovely poem! (big hugggssssss) He will always love you so much, sweet friend, just as your golden heart does to him, and the spirit of the boy in him will always shine in the love he shares! (kiss on cheek) Absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-26 10:42 PM


thank you kathleen ..magnus and noah...he is the oldest of four grandchildren and hes very special to me..i love him very much..
he made my day...HUGS to all of you..

            ~Victoria~

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5 posted 2002-01-01 12:39 PM


Very nice Victoria...James
Victoria
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6 posted 2002-01-01 09:55 AM


Thank you James..happy new year to ya

"To love and be loved is to feel the sun from both sides."
~ David Viscott


                                            


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