Open Poetry #17 |
Washed Away |
Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
i wrote a beautiful message from a place i dug deep every wretched emotion, asking forgiveness, i wondered if you would believe my rant, if i would believe myself. Funny thing though, i was out of paper, no pc available and so i wrote them in the sand. By the time you would have read it well, the tide had washed my words out to sea. Maybe they are best left there. Carol Luna ~give me peace, no matter what the cost~ [This message has been edited by Carol Luna (12-26-2001 04:40 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such sadness in your words. I don't know if it is better they were left unsaid...let your heart be your guide. I hope and pray the New Year will find your heart filled with the love you desire. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
aw I wish things would have ended differently! You deserve true love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
maybe... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice try...I think you should still ask for forgiveness...because it was a desire in your heart wanting to be given or received...James |
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