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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-12-26 02:06 PM



The moon’s gentle weave
through the rhythm
of strolling clouds
lends itself as a
stairway to romance
as flames dance upon
a stage of kindling

and a soft kiss…passion’s dawning,
sparks familiar intrigue.

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-26 02:08 PM


Annie, this is wonderful, well written and soft.....very nicely done.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-26 02:09 PM


*sigh* you set the stage for romance so beautifully....more and more I wish for someone to share such times as this with. BRAVO!!! I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-26 02:32 PM




(sigh) Oh Annie, you are sooooooo romantic, your loving heart kindles with the joys of true love and passion! (kiss on cheek) I hope you had the happiest holidays, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-26 03:04 PM


hmm........lovely! Soft and gentle. I really like this.
vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-12-26 07:39 PM



A Whisper's Caress-
So soft and tender...just lovely.
Hugs,
~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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6 posted 2001-12-26 07:42 PM


Lovely and romantic Annie...enjoyed
Merry Christmas to you.

                      ~Victoria~

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
7 posted 2001-12-27 02:42 PM


everyone,
thank you for the great replies.
I am so happy you each liked this.

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