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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
I feel inside the tides, and pull of surge to smell the salt as the breeze will merge To walk the sands that stretch beyond leading to the stillness of low tidal pond Finding a boulder to rest in repose absorbing the thoughts and the subtle flows You are there, and then not as the feelings swirl tossed and turned, flotsam of life in abandonment whirl Closing the eyes, sparkles of light still dance reflection of love that was given by your glance A soft sigh escapes from deep within wondering if the times will be given me again For what is there, will never be gone as long as the breeze brings forth its song A haunting cry rides on that wind to ever remind of the time that was when The now or the then, or of what is to be stretching beyond the simplicity of me All I know is what I can feel when the fingertips of breeze do reveal |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
well...this was a welcome respite today! Sometimes I think you should write guided meditation!  Have missed you, M'Lo!Hope you are having a wonderful holiday! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Serenity, your presence was a wonderful present for the holidays. Good seeing you and catching your smile...very gentle smile |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
For what is there, will never be gone as long as the breeze brings forth its song A haunting cry rides on that wind to ever remind of the time that was when The now or the then, or of what is to be stretching beyond the simplicity of me All I know is what I can feel when the fingertips of breeze do reveal ========================================== There you go...stiring the fire and sending a message in the smoke on a memory's breeze... Mark is always telling me to catch the breezes too... had to smile at you for this one sweet keeper... another poetic stick on the fire me thinks You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wonderful writng.Hope you had a wonderful holiday. Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how incredibly tender this poem is. It flows over the heart like a soft caress. *sigh* I absolutely love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (12-26-2001 01:27 PM).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I hope you know how much your words touch me. I couldn't possibly pick a favorite line here...I am definately keeping this....you moved me with this....touched a deep ache...love this  |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
I love your poem, although it made me a little sad as Im doing so much wondering os thens and whens myself these days. If only I could write a response with words as beautiful, so you would know I mean it. If your poem flowed any better, It would slide and run right out of my computer. Go ahead, push your luck; find out how much love the world can hold |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Why, JM, if I could get a smile from you the the fire was worth stirring...very gentle smile Thank you,Peaches, for your kind words, and yes, thank you, I am having a wonderful holiday with my kids being in town for the first time together in two years..very gentle smile Ahh, thank you, Startime, that is very nice of you to say so. I hope your holidays are doing well for you..very gentle smile Then, Susan, I am very humbled that these words touched and am very happy that they did. You just made my day...very gentle smile Apachecat906, your words tell me that you mean it, and I appreciate them in all their kindness...very gentle smile |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet frined, such a soft and gentle bittersweet verse! (sigh) May these reflections become priceless treasures of love and hope in your heart forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I hope you had the happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Logan--Your thoughts swirl into and around time...and always come back again to capture the moment still. Love reading them in this poem. Hugs! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This has such a peaceful feeling to it, An acceptance of things as they are, without losing memories. This is the way I would like to think. Smiles.. Sandra |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Thank you, Noah, you are always kind with your words and thoughts. Appreciate you being here..gentle smile Ahh, Martie, I appreciate the smile that went with your reply. A lovely thing to say...very gentle smile Sandra, very gentle smile. Have missed seeing you and your words make me reflect, that yes, accept with the memories, smile and go on. Thank you.. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...absorb thought as subtle flows... upon the day when west wind blows in the morn when song is high in the eve, when rest is nigh... absorb the love of one who came for the wind carries ever her name... You inspirational poet, you... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Logan, I must have been away when this one was posted....and a beautiful one it is too. So glad I did not miss it....well done. ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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