Open Poetry #17 |
Waiting |
Second_Guess Junior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 11 |
Waiting I sit and wait Watching the phone I pick up the receiver Make sure I hear The steady tone You promised You would call But I’m here alone I believed you I wonder why I let my hopes rise I shouldn’t condone But I always do. Because despite My common sense I love you. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Love makes us do some crazy things.You have touched this subject well. Peaches |
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prov1717 Member
since 2001-12-26
Posts 74NE |
very good, it makes me think of how much people love me sometimes in spite of all i do ya know. thanks. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
seems long ago, I settles this issue and it will recur again and again..so I don't wait for calls and it is always nice to get some. Nicely done. |
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Second_Guess Junior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 11 |
Thank you for stopping in to read. I'm appreaciate your time. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Love knows no logic... Don't be second guessing yourself... Follow your heart.. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
What is commonsense to Love?? If Love knows commonsense, we won't be falling in love with the wrong person over and over again... Ummm... hehe. that was me I'm talking about... Anywayz, the disappointment can be seen in this poem, coz the higher your hopes are, the more easily disappointed you'll get... *sigh* That's life. _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sad but so very beautiful, sweet friend, we must keep ourselves from setting our expectations too high and accept what makes us happy in love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I hope you ha dthe happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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