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Second_Guess
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0 posted 2001-12-26 01:44 AM



Waiting

I sit and wait
Watching the phone
I pick up the receiver
Make sure I hear
The steady tone
You promised
You would call
But I’m here alone
I believed you
I wonder why
I let my hopes rise
I shouldn’t condone
But I always do.
Because despite
My common sense
I love you.



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peaches73533
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1 posted 2001-12-26 01:49 AM


Love makes us do some crazy things.You have touched this subject well.
Peaches

prov1717
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2 posted 2001-12-26 02:07 AM


very good, it makes me think of how much people love me sometimes in spite of all i do ya know. thanks.
ecrivan
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3 posted 2001-12-26 02:13 AM


seems long ago, I settles this issue and it will recur again and again..so I don't wait for calls and it is always nice to get some.
Nicely done.


Second_Guess
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4 posted 2001-12-26 09:35 AM


Thank you for stopping in to read. I'm appreaciate your time.

Nan
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5 posted 2001-12-26 09:48 AM


Love knows no logic... Don't be second guessing yourself... Follow your heart..
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6 posted 2001-12-26 09:56 AM


What is commonsense to Love?? If Love knows commonsense, we won't be falling in love with the wrong person over and over again... Ummm... hehe. that was me I'm talking about...

Anywayz, the disappointment can be seen in this poem, coz the higher your hopes are, the more easily disappointed you'll get... *sigh* That's life.

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Florence

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7 posted 2001-12-26 11:11 AM




(sigh) Sad but so very beautiful, sweet friend, we must keep ourselves from setting our expectations too high and accept what makes us happy in love! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I hope you ha dthe happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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