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Apart and Together, Our Hearts
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Apart and Together, Our Hearts |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Think of me throughout the day as I celebrate love for you. Sharing love in our special way as only our hearts can ever do. Warm my being with melted word of love flowing from a shining heart Cherish me for songs we have heard of our life song, together, not apart. I love you my dear, whether together or in moments when very much apart. I walk at your side during our day. Holding you ever close, close to stay. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a magnificent love poem. You sure are good with these, Magnus. It's enough to make the heart of a lady swoon. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Barry! You have done it again! *Swoon...sigh!* Lovely indeed. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I hear your song in my head! Lovely done. Good Morning! Lizzy http://poets2000.com/lizzyvivian ~The first two cup of tea is to throw away; what remains is the best of all. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Your wife is a lucky lady for you cam make the heart of any lady swoon with delight with your words.You are a true romantic. Peaches |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen, this is a day she will never forget. And she has thanked me for it in some very wonderful ways which this heart won't forget any time soon....Glad you enjoyed this... THANK YOU... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nancy...this has been a special day for her and me as well....her smile says all that I need to hear...or see... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Lizzy...I have a very good teacher that has helped me understand her needs better... An old dog can learn new tricks...Thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches....this old heart is trying to show a lady that she is just that....a lady. She won't forget today...Breakfast, Movie, Dinner, something special....and me.... Thanx. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
This is beautiful and romantic. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Walker...this has been a romantic day...and an enjoyably romanctic one too. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
It's good to see that romance still lives. Wonderful work, Magnus. She is lucky indeed. All writing comes |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
It's nice to see romance in a man's heart! Do or die! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well done Sir. . . long may Romance live. . . ------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
LW...it is not she who is lucky...it is me.. and we had a wonderful day together today... very much so. Thank you for commenting. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Domzi...thank you and it feels really good as well... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sven....I do so much agree....Long may romance live... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"Warm my being with melted word" You do this well!! Happy to hear that your day was so full, excellent words to share! |
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