Open Poetry #17 |
new year resolutions |
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i resolve not to be a sunflower and blossom on my own terms i resolve to be a bull that charges determinedly at its goals i resolve not to be a caterpillar that only looks forward to its metamorphosis i resolve to be the firefly in someone's darkness whirlpool i resolve to (er, maybe i would talk about that IF i try to fulfill the above four directions) challenge:write your own new year resolutions poem! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oooooooooooo good challenge Merry Christmas |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo creative, sweet friend, may your New Years Resolution bring you great hope and cheer and promise for the future ahead! (smiles) Oooohhhhh...I love the challenge idea, I'll have to give that a spin! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! That line about not waiting for one's metamorphosis hit me right between the eyes! Powerful section, especially! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Great poem and great new challange, Faterider. Happy New Year. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
this year i resolve to quit smoking ciggarettes!! (HA!!!) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, that's quite a challenge. How about this? I resolve to stop making useless resolutions I have no intentions of resolutely following though with at the time I make them. And how about shorter sentences? LOL. Have a great safe and fun holiday season, my friend. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I resolve to get through the holiday season lol, but your resolutions are much nicer! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
faterider, I resolve to be a puppy and not piddle around anymore! LOL Fun challenge. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
I alwayz bite off more than I could swallow, and this year is no different. Instead of just one 'safe' resolution, I got myself a list. I've posted my own resolutions too... _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Your boldness speaks clearly...reminds me of extrovert versus introvert...and you made your choice. I enjoyed reading this. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
I like it.Powerful words and a great challenge. peaches |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
we all need a little more "bull" in ourselves. That is my favorite line. Kathleen (Kay) |
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