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Hawaiian Melodies (Inspired By James Michael)
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Hawaiian Melodies (Inspired By James Michael) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
I was inspired to write this poem by the gorgeous visions that I had reading James Michael's "Polynesian Nights". You can find his breathtakingly beautiful piece here: /pip/Forum52/HTML/002716.html Hawaiian Melodies By: Noah Eaton 12/23/01 Dance with me under these kukui trees Sway with me against the rustling coconut palms Lie with me in this bed of purple orchids under these volcanic skies Deep into this romantic hula we will gracefully fall Take my hand in this sensual hula Embraced between song as old as rhyme with the sacred ukeke Your hair wears luscious leis of red ginger and heliconia Take my hands and swing with me in this hot Polynesian breeze I can hear you say the air is singing Against the symphonies of kaekeekes and Fijian flutes Dancing to the beat of the Pahu drums in your coconut bikini Swaying grass skirts, bathing in passion under the burning moon Tonight is our night, my love, take me Share with me the rainbows of these Hawaiian Melodies Under these coconut palms, we’ll share our love happily Every night before I fall asleep, I want to say to you “Aloha au ia `oe!” Aloha au ia ‘oe (I love you) [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-23-2001 08:33 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
maybe one day you and your sweet love will do just this Noah  this is beautiful, and yes, James' poem was too |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*gasp* This is MY FAVORITE poem of yours so far! I have always wanted to visit Hawaii, hopefully someday that's where my homeymoon will be. I'm glad to see James inspiring you, he is a really great poet. putting this in my library hunny! RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah, this is just beautiful! You have such a romantic soul! I hope one day all your dreams come true! ~Holiday Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Noah I'm impressed...you write it like your living it...so descriptive...wonderful flow of Hawaiian Aloha...James |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I am impressed too with your descriptiveness, your choice of words is not to be underestimated! Maybe I'll catch you enjoying a Hawaiin breeze one day! |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Such a romantic poem my dear friend! If only I could write the way you could and capture all the senses just right. Awesome poem, I love it!!! From your good friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, I'm impressed with this work...I just love those hawaiian words you used...very nice write!! Nathan |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautiful and romantic. I can almost smell the flowers, and hear the ocean. Sandra |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
*sigh* I absoulutely love this baby! Back on top it goes! love, Joanna |
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