Open Poetry #17 |
Angel With A Broken Wing |
D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Sometimes we have to go find our own special place in order to create the beauty within us. There is an angel here on earth Who has a broken wing He was trapped here by a storm A fierce storm that hailed him down Darting about he became lost In the wilderness of mistrust The treatment of fellow humans Brought tears to his spirit Hampering the healing process As he hid between us in the shadows His whisper views came with insight But the dark side created doubt About the sincerity of some As he danced with the butterflies of thought In the bushes of wild roses The innocence here blessed him It was only when he wandered The streets of commotion That all those negative actions Drove him into a frenzy So he retreated into his garden of love And weaved a tale of songs So sweet that the other angels Came to join him in chorus The others asked how come His voice had grown so brilliant He said that all the depth Had come from all the suffering It had opened him to the beauty Of creating his own garden To sing that song of emotion Some wanted to learn to sing like this But he said you have to learn to cry first So they joined together lifting him up To the sky so full of beauty That the melody melted into the night D.Lester Young (12/23/01) Tuscaloosa, AL Copyright © D.Lester Young (White Eagle poetry) |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Some wanted to learn to sing like this But he said you have to learn to cry first" DLY~ I really enjoy your poetry I hope you have a wonderful Christmas |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Lester, I know just what you mean, for when I was going through my long depression, I found talking to myself and being alone helped me learn deeper about myself, and in listening to my heart, I have found these inner-peace! (big hugggsssss) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always a pleasure to read! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A wonderfully angelic story D.Lester ... very nicely woven, much enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
An angel would certainly be out of place in our world. He did the right thing, seeking refuge in a place of his own. We must all do that at times....very good poem |
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