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Untitled (a love poem)
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Untitled (a love poem) |
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Ven Member
since 2001-10-01
Posts 102U.K. |
Untitled.(a love poem) Mind ticking, twisting, turning. Fingers tingling, senses burning, mouth dry. Limbs weak tongue tied, cant speak. Cheeks flushed. Eyes wide and bright, Not drug induced, just love at first sight. by Ven. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A nutshell chock full of truth... thank you! |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
You said it all.... I quite enjoyed it.. Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!! Is that what happened. Okay now that clears up those symptoms very well. I really like this poem. I wonder if there is such a thing as "love at first read"?  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
And it happens as quick as that!! I do recall this, .... exactly the way it happened!! Well done!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yup! That's it!! One bite from the love bug, and, you have all the symptoms! Nancy ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Ven Member
since 2001-10-01
Posts 102U.K. |
Thankyou all This was just one of those silly little things that just fell out of the pen on its own. Must be because I'm in love. |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Aww so sweet Ven, I hope that loving feeling never fades away! |
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Ven Member
since 2001-10-01
Posts 102U.K. |
Me too. |
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