Open Poetry #17 |
Nature’s Peace |
GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Tiny feathers dot the sky as they flutter to the ground to join it in a sweet embrace The boughs above adorned in white are bending ever so slightly Night comes and the ground gleams, donning its seasonal coat Peace in its truest form is reached, as the earth stands still for a few faint moments, or so it seems © David 2001 [This message has been edited by GenXer (12-23-2001 04:05 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet David, the beauty of day and night shines through your lovely words! (smiles) May natures boughs forever bloom and bring the art of Mother Nature to us all to behold! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Dave, What wonderful images you created I liked it Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very nice I am still waiting for the snow levels to drop just a bit, then I'll actually get some!! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Dave, what wonderful visual imagery you've got here like on a crisp clear wintery night! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Some really beautiful imagery, Dave and so very well composed. I love the barely noticeable rhyme scheme! We actually had a bit of snow today, and a little bit of it actually stuck to the roads, making them a bit slippery...and our little pond has some ice on it which is covered with snow and looks quite pretty. Almost as beautiful as your poem. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Thank you all for reading this. We haven't had any snow this year here in NY. Maybe in January, but it has been a pretty warm winter so far. Dave [This message has been edited by GenXer (12-24-2001 12:47 PM).] |
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