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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2001-12-23 02:33 AM


A Pseudo kind of Love

She could not walk away
if she loved me some say.
She could not find the place
in her heart to allow her to depart.
And yet as sure as love
lives in my heart she did
find the will to depart
and I wonder how she
could love me so little
and how could she have
the strength to just walk out the door
leaving me thinking she neither wants
me or needs me anymore.
As the last traces of pseudo
love depart I close my door.

JamesLee
December23
2001



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amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
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A State of Disarray
1 posted 2001-12-23 02:51 AM


Oh, I hate it when that happens!!!  We all get fooled, though.  You painted it well, my friend...
rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-12-23 10:48 AM


James,

     Such a sad but well written write. Hugs to you my friend.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-23 12:11 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh James, this is so heartwrenchingly well-written, I pray that this isn't related to your recent relationship, but if it is, my heart goes out to you! (big hugggssssss) Love is not always meant to be, but as long as you follow your heart, you will find true love and eternal happiness! (sad sigh) So sad but well-written, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
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4 posted 2001-12-23 12:13 PM


James, it is her loss.. Merry Christmas, strbbux
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