Open Poetry #17 |
unacustomed to pink and blue |
redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
there are no yellow flowers or blue sea out side the windows, only silt from the sounds of next door, and the laundry is the same only colorful. i am ruminating the differnce of the crystal clear and winter blue. the differnce of the ocean from sandy shore to mountain rock roar. there is no yellow, only pink blossoms, on brown braches, they do give me relief: the brown does. but not the same as the yellow, when they are alive. and away from the turqoise blue. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is wonderful. Redheart angrybraids? Are your braids really angry? I love that name, and the image of an angry braid makes me laugh. Nice to meet you. I like your poem. Yellow is so bright and cheerful, it is no wonder you miss the yellow. [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-23-2001 04:03 AM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've found that yellow is just blue without green. . . and that this poem says more than I'll ever be able to know. . . and I like that. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
it is a joy to see you again, always a joy to read your words, this is exquisite. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Amelia, we've all missed you so very much, your words are always so colorful and a pleasure to read! (kiss on cheek) We all wish you the happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amelia, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Beautiful way you weave your words, Redheart. Why are your braids angry? copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i miss your words, redheart and am so glad that you posted this... this is haunting and whimsical~just the way i like your poetry... |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is a very pretty poem. Thank you for sharing. I too have missed your beautiful words and am happy to see you back with all of us. Dawn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i dont think i've read you before...i like this glad to have stopped in to enjoy this write of yours... hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the meanings in this poem are so vivid....good to see you again....lovely words.... Happy Holidays Lauren~ ***** Tomorrow's another day |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Wow. Peaches |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RedHeartsAngryBraids~ You delight us with your gentle thoughts~ I wish you wishes of much pleasure filled in the coming year~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Amelia, my zen poet, it's been awhile... As always your style and observations are moving...this one strikes me so sad, tho! I hope you stick around, as I have missed your differences of looking at things. I hope you are well, sweet friend! |
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