Open Poetry #17 |
Satin Gown |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Satin Gown Jewels of blue enhance her eye Golden hair reflects the sky Rouge of pink on silken face Satin gown of flowing lace Crimson red to wet her lips Pearly glaze on fingertips Finally, to complete the whole Poetry adorns her soul Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (12-22-2001 09:01 PM).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
so. . .this is how you look. . . a dress of the finest words. . . wonderfully done. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
The most important part is of course - Poetry adorns her soul. So enjoyable and well worded. Roger |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you truly do wear this gown, for your inspirations and words are priceless gems! (kiss on cheek) You are a true queen of words, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Elizabeth, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, It doesn't get much better than that. Love Sy |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Elizabeth, your write left me bejewelled in wonder. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
But, but...you forgot the great big, fuzzy blue cookie monster slippers! ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
I'm sure I ould have included Mysterias entire wardobe in this poem, but I was trying o keep it short Thanks all for your kind comments Liz |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
beautiful writing, Liz... absolutely beautiful....... merry christmas, my friend! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I just found my Christmas Present. Right here. She's beautiful. And she shares very well... |
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