Open Poetry #17 |
Is Moments Of The Lonely Night That Make.... |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I must quell the tears of useless passion as no other moon has yet shown for me. All done is to make a heart again hasten and never again be wild or feel free. Is moments of the lonely night that make the tears do fall to the pillows below. True love causes within this heart to ache for that which away seems to never show. Let not me again do become one more that have felt piled and pummeled in your heart. Just let me simply love and so adore your love’s joy freely given from the start. My passion flows from ever endless well as my dreams of you within me do find. I rise up to the tolling of the bell with yearning desire true in restless mind. And should I never again find this love I'll forever feel the joy of content. For on the whitest wings of soaring dove the greatest gift given me has been sent. The smiles of my memories.... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Barry, I do believe this is one of your best! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry, this is sooooooo beautiful, always cherish your precious memories, as may true love forever fill your heart and be the weaver of many more. (big hugggssssss) I too believe this is one of your best yet, I am amazed by your wonderful talent! (smiles) Have the happiest holidays, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Magnus, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Magnus, I love reading your poetry You write so well..... express so much emotion. Well done Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Kay...just doing a little bit of poetic flying...glad you liked this. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...you never wane in your ability to express gratitude to another...thank you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanks Walker..you do very well yourself.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very well done, poet sir! Enjoyed thoroughly. ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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mutington Member
since 2000-11-29
Posts 132New Jersey, USA |
I've missed the elegance of your work.. ..'Shakespeare'. Joyce mutington/joyce |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this star always softens it shine when I read your poetry.....Absolutely wonderful. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"The smiles of my memories." Enjoyed...James |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara...thank you always...and a Merry Christmas to you and your family... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Nancy...just trying something a little different today...Happy Holidays... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
J. Lady...thank you...I Know... and I have not stopped writing... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . well done. . . flowing like water from a heart of love. . . excellent Sir. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Magnus - very pleasant memories they must be, as you have written.... BC |
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