Open Poetry #17 |
In Search Of.....The Net Is Cast |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I cling to the net as I cast out for love. Sifting the waters of my empty mind. Praying for help from up high above. For in this net...alas...nothing I find. There is a hole in my simple snare brought forward from my very depth Keeps me from ever catching there and to this mine two eyes have wept. When you are powerless to the rift that causes you not to constrain. Just turn to that which is a true gift as hearts speak and no longer refrain. Is the words of a tender heart said not in vain as they are spoke true. Mine love words shall all be read ‘cause my heart and soul are you. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments from the heart Magnus, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Magnus, may your seas always be calm when you are out casting, and may you always return with treasures, troved... wonderful! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Sooooooooo beautifully tranquil your emotions are in this soft poem, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) May you forever have clear sailing on the sea of your heart and find the most beautiful love deep down! (sigh) Beautiful, sweet friend, just beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! :-) May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, I said the last one was one of your best, ok this is!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I could almost hear Leonard Nimoy reciting this... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfect Barry....just perfect! *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such tender words from your heart and pen always make me sigh with the pleasure of reading them. Well done.**hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Magnus, I could feel the pull of the ocean in this write. Excellent. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus, A very nice write, enjoyed. |
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