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Old Friend
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CondorSey Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 28Dam-Nation |
I often think back to those nights Of those endless conversations We'd talk as we walk Never caring about the destination. You would speak of old friends Your stories, I clung to each part They were all so dear to you Fondly etched in your heart. I often think back to those nights I'd think as I walk Of you chatting with another Am I an old friend of whom you talk. Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, its always such a beautiful feeling to talk to old friends! (big hugggssssss) I LOVE IT, this is such a beautiful debut!!! (big huggsssss) Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, I look forward to reading more of your poetry and your responses to our wonderful family of poets! (Please check your e-mail for a special greeting)  Love, Noah Eaton - Moderator/Passions in Poetry |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Very Good First Post! I look forward to seeing more of your work! *Happy Holidays, hugs, Nancy* *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
that's how old friends should be!nicely said |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oooo, I really enjoyed this one! I really never thought about it like that. I often speak of old friends and old loves. Now I wonder if someone out there is with someone new and speaking of me. Great first post! I look forward to many more. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Turning the mirror on one's self is a good thought to have - how would we be remembered... well, I hope, as well done as this. Welcome to Passions! Karilea |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
A rather nice first post! I like the questioning theme of it. And welcome to the joint, I think you will like it here. You are among amateur friends. "As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it." Wendell Berry |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Great write of quiet reflection. I have often wondered the same in my life. Love your signature line. Big welcome to these pages...I think you're going to fit in real well. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
CondorSey, Liked your poem Loved your signature Welcome to Passions Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome. I like the way you moved from your walks together to his walks with another, nice reflective sequence. I like your message and your style. Nothing low-level about either one. |
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CondorSey Junior Member
since 2001-12-24
Posts 28Dam-Nation |
Wow, I feel so overwhelmed by the positive responses to my poem and my presence; I do appreciate it greatly. This was my favorite of all the poems I have written and is the first time any of my poetic writings have been viewed by anyone. This may not be the best forum topic for this, but I do welcome any comments, assistance or critcism in order to improve my writing. Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
a lovely poem-- welcome to passions! There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
I welcome you here to passions, and I must say is a very good first post here, I loved it! Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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