Open Poetry #17 |
Pine Needles |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Pine Needles Pine needles swept into a pile Are adept to incite a wile. And clouds do actors of engage To open up a seeming stage There, colors stir the atmosphere With hues and shades and veils of steer. That makes the figures of my dream Come to life in a carefree seem. Sometimes there’re knights on holy quests Others, just scenery at best Today they sail a sea of blue Billowing sails of green in view. And sea gulls add a touch of real To make a vision of surreal And now my mind has caught the guile A super nova dreamer’s wile It’s here I walk a rainbows bend Tranquil to a fantasies end |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, finally. I've been sitting here waiting for my morning gift to arrive, and there it is, in full fledged form of familial delight, for my family is not complete unless Sy gives me my good morning... and I so enjoyed... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There, colors stir the atmosphere With hues and shades and veils of steer. That makes the figures of my dream Come to life in a carefree seem. Sometimes there’re knights on holy quests Others, just scenery at best Today they sail a sea of blue Billowing sails of green in view. And sea gulls add a touch of real To make a vision of surreal And now my mind has caught the guile A super nova dreamer’s wile It’s here I walk a rainbows bend Tranquil to a fantasies end =================================== and by the gift of your gifted pen...we walk with you...and tis a lovely view from your minds eye. May I join you again tomorrow? Where shall we walk? Eden, Shangi-La, your beaches of understand? Paris for tea *L* Be there or be square me Stinkylove LOL Wondrous poem of color and vision Sy-babers me You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and the cream in my coffee is JM's response...LOL... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice, Sy. I like this. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Good morning my sunshine. *L* JM, Anywhere, anytime, would be just fine. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Sunshine, You are a delight. *L* SmartChick, Thank you sweet. *L* |
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