Open Poetry #17 |
Dance With Me To Love |
Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Dance With Me To Love You waltz to me in whispers of soothing serenade, your eyes, they leap with Luna to mesh in flecks of jade, I know that God exists He twinkles in your eyes, eternal rapture lives it found me by surprise, I finally opened up my soul and cleared the path to see, I now embrace the fated truth that we were meant to be, angels captivate my ears through your voice of song, their laughs choreograph where you and I belong, tick of time surceases when your spirit sings, this is the perfect romance it gives my heartbeat wings Take me to tranquility to tango in your touch, surge my skin with passion's urge of bond I crave so much, set the sun for evening sway, rock me in your arms, penetrate my dreams, so soft into my sacred charms, infuse me with your inner drum, spark me with your splendor, overflow into my sighs, drink of my surrender, move within my melody, stride within sensation, grace my place of lace, explore my exaltation, paint your smile upon my lips to tremble with your kindred kiss, then, dance with me to love, so true beyond the realm of bliss By Melissa P. Monette |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
once again, the Queen of Romance serenades us with yet another wonderful work. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Is that all you can think about....sax, sax, sax????? It's very nice, Melissa |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You waltz to me in whispers of soothing serenade, your eyes, they leap with Luna to mesh in flecks of jade, I know that God exists He twinkles in your eyes, eternal rapture lives it found me by surprise, I finally opened up my soul and cleared the path to see, I now embrace the fated truth that we were meant to be, ================================= this just radiates the passionate soul-mate kind of love we all dream of... and your gift of cadence and melodics adds to the enchantment. beautiful melis Ice covers my soul |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ah, melissa you have once more orchestrated a romantic poem as the "maestro of love" that you are! hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I was going to be so serious too Melissa honest I was, until that skaliwag put his two sax worth in! This was absolutely dreamy and romantic, and yes, very saxy too Lovely! ~*~ Carpe' Diem ~*~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
A dream we can all relate to Melissa, our soul's music, our soul's love *sigh*. Beautifully penned and visually.. Take a bow girl!!!! Isis |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Melissa, So beautiful.. you words flow and move with a life of their own. Wonderful. Hugs, Tara And I have to say.. LMAO@Balladeers reply! "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A looooong ~Sigh~..... Wow...Melissa...this is so so softly and tenderly beautiful. You've captivated my heart with this one....would you set it free please?.. An absolutely charming wonderful piece....that has sung right to my heart. Thank you dearest... {{{Hugs}}} ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How beautiful, what a wonderful dance you have going here. May it last forever. Sandra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Melissa...this is just breathtakingly beautiful. I love the music too, and only wish you had mentioned the name of it...I am a music nut, and although have heard this piece many times cannot put my finger on the name or where I have heard it. ~hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before.~ |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
missy, I am so glad i came across this! it's so beautiful!, you always write romance well |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Missy, Your words,music,and pictures have left a melancholy note upon my heart.great job. Peaches |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Dance with me to love." Enjoyed this...James |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how absolutely wonderful. This poem sent me on a romantic vision that felt incredible. Just what I needed. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 11-18-2001).] |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Melissa, Such tender words of Love flow from your pen, heartfelt words that soothe the soul with the message "LOVE LIVES"! Thanks for sharing this masterpiece, Peace, Dennis :^) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Fantastic! Wonderful. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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PoeticLicense Junior Member
since 2001-11-18
Posts 30 |
Sooooooo romantic, a sailboat, moonlit night, soft music, and your words. A perfect scene in every way! |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
The feelings and romance in this just set me to smiling, dreaming, believing in love. Another stunning beauty from your pen. Truly a beautiful lovers dance If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* soooooooo beautiful romantic....love it very much! Charisma ~TMP~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Melissa, you are sooooooo romantic, your beautiful words always bring smooth jazz to all our hearts! (sigh) May true love always fill your angelic heart! (sigh) I love you, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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