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In Line Love |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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Do you know How I love you How, in the middle of this madness I can still connect to your eyes and my heart fleets in girlish swoon Right here I could I would If it weren't for the fact We'd lose our place In this mile long check out line So I'll just stand here Losing myself in our Love With the one who pushes the buggy and all my buttons |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Regina Am I so privileged as to be the first to comment on this enchanting piece? I think so. I loved the image portrayed and I wish you and your family all the very best for Christmas. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I love it too! It has a nice feel to it and it is very original sweet Regina!! (hugs) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, Cute write, I enjoyed the read. *L* |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Right here I could I would If it weren't for the fact We'd lose our place In this mile long check out line This is priceless, Regina. And so would be the look on the other customers faces were you not to exercise such self control! Loved it, thanks. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've been shopping, were in the middle of WalMart, with two shopping carts of toys and "things" and he was pushing the buggy...and your buttons, because he said nothing at all amid all of the hubbub! Bless him! and Thank You! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Regina, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (big hugggsssssss) Love always fills your words, you are soooooo romantic! (kiss on cheek) Have the happiest holidays, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh I loved it! I remember that "look in your eyes and get lost" kind of love and I thank you for reminding me of it. ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Regina, Would it help if I held your place in line? LOL I've been looking for that something about you...oh never mind, I think I found it!  |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Do you know How I love you How, in the middle of this madness I can still connect to your eyes' Fantastic write, Regina! I truly love these lines, especially...the whole poem is great, but these lines stood out to me...wonderful read! sp   And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rwood - very nice... you do tell it like it is... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RWood~ LOVE IT~ Happy Holidays, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Dear Regina, you sound truly in love, thanks for the sharing which warms all our hearts, have a wonderful Christmas and New Year. Once again a beautiful write. Sincerely Rick |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
A lovely poem about your husband, Regina. He's a very lucky man. Now concentrate on your shopping! LOL! *hugs* my friendMichael Michael Auguste~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Why are you shopping? Okay, I suppose you must. Be careful driving home! Enjoyed this view. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
That look of love is just wonderful somy~. Love it and merry holidays and happy christmas to you too!! *w* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Wow...  Great job with this attention getter! Deb |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So I'll just stand here Losing myself in our Love With the one who pushes the buggy and all my buttons ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Regina! This is just yummy!  I am so glad I didn't miss it! *Happy Holidays* ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh...the romance that can occur in a check out line...certainly many fantasies have been born there during an otherwise boring wait...Liked this Regina...very good. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Many Thanks to all of you! I appreciate you each for joining in on the check out line madness. We must keep our sanity somehow!! In the spirit of hope and heart..I wish you all great Love and Peace! Sincerely, Regina |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Wonderful Regina. But how come he gets to push the buggy, that’s the only thing I like about grocery shopping…run down the aisle with the buggy and then stand on it as it coasts the rest of the way….what…you mean no one else does that???…I’m the only fool???Lol. Great write of love and desire, I love it. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
You can't beat love in the checkout line. I love the way the short story unfolded. What a great use of life. Love is everywhere and anywhere. Thank You. Roger |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
This is so sweet! I loved it and can definately relate. Wonderful write! |
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