Open Poetry #17 |
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Finger Painting |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Finger Painting If I could draw your heart would I know how to blend your colours would my hands touch just enough reds and blues to paint your passion would I be in possession of the selflessness to create space for the journey of others? If I could draw your heart would you feel the tracing of my fingertips would you recognize the warmth would you know the inscription of my initials in the lower right corner? 12-21-01 ever deep...runs the wishing well for fairytale illusions [This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (12-20-2001 05:43 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Annie, I believe we all have these feelings when wondering if love is real or not! (sigh) May the true love of your life forever touch your heart and leave happy imprints of eternity of eternal love! (sigh) Your loving words always sign the initials of beauty! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Hi Annie...must be the season for loving thoughts ha..nicely done hon hugss ~Victoria~ |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
AWhispersCaress~ Beautifully done~ So delicately portrayed~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Annie, I really like this.. alot. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Whispers Caress - Beautifully done. I really liked this stanza: "would I be in possession of the selflessness to create space for the journey of others?" Very good. Dave |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
That was amazing. Not even that describes how beuatifuly written your poem is. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
A Whisper's Caress- This is such a soft and tender write. Just lovely. ![]() Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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