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Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-12-20 04:12 PM

The Very Least

It was the least one could do
To catch the wind’s cool sigh
The very least one might do,
Lingering over a last good bye

Your lips swept warm over me
A thousand waves of sheer delight
The very least that you could do
Before you left that night

It was the very least for me
To see blue eyes, still haunting,
And like the very beast of you,
Your love for me, still wanting

Like a refrain from sad old songs
That lingers throughout the night
The very least that still belongs
Is beholding you in my sight

The very least of me is this true love
Set forever free upon wings of a dove

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-20 04:37 PM

(sigh) So beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend! (sigh) May your love forever shine and become something magical that seems like the most of joy! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, your work is always the greatest pleasure to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet lady, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

2 posted 2001-12-20 04:54 PM

The very least I can do is tell you how much I like this, Lady. Nice work!

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-12-20 07:12 PM

It was the least one could do
To catch the wind’s cool sigh
The very least one might do,
Lingering over a last good bye

Your lips swept warm over me
A thousand waves of sheer delight
The very least that you could do
Before you left that night
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jeepers creepers this is a sigh waiting to happen....
this is lovely Lady...and tis the least I can do to put it in me library

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2001-12-20 07:57 PM

This..I love. A sad goodbye, made to sound beautiful.
Incredible writing.
Sandra

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-12-20 08:46 PM

Very nice, Lady... I particularly like the final couplet... On the wings of a white dove.. a perfect place for a love that's free...

DarkAngelChelle
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 87
Kansas

6 posted 2001-12-20 08:50 PM

Wow ... this piece just makes me want to sigh. It flows so wonderfully, and the lines just wind together into a beautiful, sweetly sad song.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-12-20 09:25 PM

LadyInWhite~
So delicately penned ... from within~

Happy Holidays to you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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