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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-20 03:18 PM


You give my eyes a gleam
when they glance in your direction.
They cry a joyous stream
as you shower me with affection.

Dreams will come to you in the night
of candles,  rugs, of sensual sight.
Soft charms will feel my tenderness
once a  touch, kiss.....become  caress.

Raindrops couldn't cease this fire
that burns inside for you.
Heat index only goes higher...
Strong to endure a blizzard through

The rain will cease as passions flow
while two become one,  let it go.
Moans of joy will echo in  ears
as slightest of touch bring forth tears.

Romance me in the breeze
beneath a baby blue sky.
Secluded picnics under trees.
Memories are made for life.

The breeze will swirl over your eyes
as softness caresses shoulders, thighs.
Within my arms  steady, strong
as one we carve such a love song.

Love songs  pour from our hearts
as we embrace to the melody.
Like framed pictures of purest art
love's in full view for the world to see.

Vision of two under blue skies.
Our song sung bringing to us sighs.
Paints flowing over  canvas clean.
Two as one...entwined in the scene.

Rose Petal.....pleased to collaborate on this....
Thank You for asking...

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
walker
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1 posted 2001-12-20 03:22 PM


So very sensual and romantic. Great work.
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2 posted 2001-12-20 03:27 PM




CLAPPING WILDLY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) You make a wonderful duet, sweet friends, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic and sensual! (sigh) Magnus, your loving words always paint such beautiful portraits. Joanna, I love you so so much!!! BRAVO!!! We all love you both so much, sweet friends, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-20 04:21 PM


beautiful duet.....great teamwork here. Love it!!!

Charisma

~*Theresia~*  

Startime
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4 posted 2001-12-20 08:49 PM


*sigh* sensually romantic. It is amazing the heat that these words convey....*giggling wicked* and of course the fresh oysters I have been eating don't help when I read this kind of sexy material. BRAVO!!!!Well done, you two. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-12-21 04:18 PM


Magnus, Thank You for taking the time out to work with me, it was fun : )

And thank you to all of you for the kind words, it is ALWAYS appreciated

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6 posted 2001-12-21 04:49 PM


Nice duo,, so nice and sweet, strbbux
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7 posted 2001-12-21 08:24 PM


O'wwwwwww, you two! This is fabuloquacious..

BC

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8 posted 2001-12-21 11:23 PM


Thank you Walker...was enjoyable writing
with her..

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9 posted 2001-12-21 11:24 PM


Noah...thanx and Merry Christmas.
Magnus
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10 posted 2001-12-21 11:25 PM


Thank you Charisma...was fun working with RP.
Magnus
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11 posted 2001-12-21 11:26 PM


Gosh Karen...not the oysters...you silly
girl...thank you for the enthusiastic
reply.....Loved it...as you would say...

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12 posted 2001-12-22 03:07 PM


Thanks again everyone walker, charisma, strbbux, startime, bill, noah

we greatly appreciate it magnus and I!

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13 posted 2001-12-22 08:20 PM


I'm gone for a couple days and I miss all the good ones!  This is great, you two!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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