Open Poetry #17 |
Painting A Dream Come True (Duet With Rose Petal) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You give my eyes a gleam when they glance in your direction. They cry a joyous stream as you shower me with affection. Dreams will come to you in the night of candles, rugs, of sensual sight. Soft charms will feel my tenderness once a touch, kiss.....become caress. Raindrops couldn't cease this fire that burns inside for you. Heat index only goes higher... Strong to endure a blizzard through The rain will cease as passions flow while two become one, let it go. Moans of joy will echo in ears as slightest of touch bring forth tears. Romance me in the breeze beneath a baby blue sky. Secluded picnics under trees. Memories are made for life. The breeze will swirl over your eyes as softness caresses shoulders, thighs. Within my arms steady, strong as one we carve such a love song. Love songs pour from our hearts as we embrace to the melody. Like framed pictures of purest art love's in full view for the world to see. Vision of two under blue skies. Our song sung bringing to us sighs. Paints flowing over canvas clean. Two as one...entwined in the scene. Rose Petal.....pleased to collaborate on this.... Thank You for asking... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So very sensual and romantic. Great work. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
CLAPPING WILDLY!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS IS SOOOOOOOO BEAUTIFUL, I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) You make a wonderful duet, sweet friends, this is sooooooo beautifully romantic and sensual! (sigh) Magnus, your loving words always paint such beautiful portraits. Joanna, I love you so so much!!! BRAVO!!! We all love you both so much, sweet friends, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful duet.....great teamwork here. Love it!!! Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* sensually romantic. It is amazing the heat that these words convey....*giggling wicked* and of course the fresh oysters I have been eating don't help when I read this kind of sexy material. BRAVO!!!!Well done, you two. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Magnus, Thank You for taking the time out to work with me, it was fun : ) And thank you to all of you for the kind words, it is ALWAYS appreciated |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Nice duo,, so nice and sweet, strbbux |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
O'wwwwwww, you two! This is fabuloquacious.. BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Walker...was enjoyable writing with her.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...thanx and Merry Christmas. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Charisma...was fun working with RP. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh Karen...not the oysters...you silly girl...thank you for the enthusiastic reply.....Loved it...as you would say... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Thanks again everyone walker, charisma, strbbux, startime, bill, noah we greatly appreciate it magnus and I! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm gone for a couple days and I miss all the good ones! This is great, you two! Kathleen (Kay) |
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