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Somebody's Fool
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Somebody's Fool |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Somebody's Fool ~*Marge Tindal*~ Somebody's fool Somebody's game Someone is laughing and I hear my name It won't always be the way that it seems but for now I am drowning in someone else's stream with tears cascading thoughts evading the passionate reason in this wintering season Somebody's fool Somebody's game Someone else will be crying and I'll hear your name ~Not worth the salt in a teardrop~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WOW... this was powerfully emotive... regards to you Marge, Sudhir |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I hope you're ok...this sounds like someone has hurt you badly....very emotional poem..well done.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ Thank you ALWAYS for being there~ A little 'emote' is good for the soul~  PoetdeVine~ *giggling* here ... I couldn't be more 'okay' if I tried~ This little piece was written back in October, after listening to some Connie Francis music - 'Everybody's Somebody's Fool' just started jumping around in the jukebox-of-my-mind~ It kind of fits the mood of someone I know~ Thank you soooooo much for your concerns though~ Happy Holidays to all~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--You had me worried for a minute, until I saw your reply. Your muses sure do keep you busy. Big hugs and happy holidays to you sweet sis! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Marge, so glad that you are ok. This is an exceptional write though! Hugs. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my soul, I knew you were all right because I hadn't felt a tug of my heart string. Wonderful writing as always. You are always exceptional, this is outstanding as all of yours are. Without doubt love suits you darling girl As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, I was going to say your nobodies fool. Your just a lover girl. HUgs and kisses. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it! Don't I always? In light of your inspiration, this is a masterpiece  Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Of course you're okay...you are nobody's fool! Happy Holidays with hugs Marge! |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I enjoyed reading this and after reading your explanation, I enjoyed it even more. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ I'd never make you worry ! Somebody breaks my heart ... I'm gonna tell you so you can bust 'em~  GentleSpirit~ Thank you so much~ MarshaLove~ Awww ... you're such a dear~ Seymour~ Ah ! You do know me well~ Shhhhh, don't tell ~ *Hugs* n' *kisses* to you too~ InterLoper~ Thank you sweetie~ Serenity~ LOL ~ I try not to be~ Opeth~ I thank you for taking the time to read the replies~ Aren't they fun ? *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Ah Marge, don't know how I missed this one, but I'm gonna bump it up about 15 pages. I love it. 'Somebody's fool', indeed. Boy, we've all played that part. Great write! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TennesseeAngel~ Thanks, gal~ So pleased to see you~ Happy New Year greetings sent your way~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Okay...so I read this SEVERAL days ago, and I'm just VERY slow getting back to it..LOL. VERY convincing write, my buddy. I must admit that you actually had ME worried for a minute there...and I should KNOW better! LOL I KNOW you're nobody's fool...and if you were, I'd be right there "bustin' 'em" with Martie..LOL I DO love the MANY muses of YOU!  Love you,  ~Me "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ LOL ... I 'know' you and Martie have 'got my back' ~ Love you both~ Tee-Hee @ the two little 'feisty-fister-sisters'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Margie, I have to agree with the rest you ARE nobody's fool and he loves it. Delightful muse you have penned. Oh and I'm glad it's not true. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
wow. I am the fool right now.. but I believe that everything runs full circle and always comes back in the end. ..in hopes that I won't be the fool anymore  Great write!! |
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